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Sep 18, 2020 at 12:02pm

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Edited: September 18, 2020 at 12:03pm

Re: Lisa's Form of the week: Trichain

by Dave

Powerful testament!

Rhyme scheme is spot on, but iambic meter not so much. Mastering that technique takes more than an hour.

Let the creativity flow from your soul!

Dave
"The Poet's Place "

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