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Jul 10, 2020 at 8:32am
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here is a new form for you Dave

This is my own poetry form “LANOE”
Contains at least three tercets not more than eight
The first two lines of each tercet contain eight syllables
The third line contains three syllables.
scheme is: AAA/BBB/CCC/etc.
Can be about any subject

Gone
By Lisa Noe

See the hand that’’s withered and worn,
From a man who’s beaten and torn.
He’s no more.

Now He’s gone but love still remains,
Everything in life has now changed.
But life's strange.

Heaven is where we shall meet, my Lord,
I hunger for your precious word.
Sweetest heard.

You are my Savior, I am proud,
You speak to me so clear and loud.
in the crowd.
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here is a new form for you Dave · 07-10-20 8:32am
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Re: here is a new form for you Dave · 07-10-20 4:59pm
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Re: here is a new form for you Dave · 07-16-20 9:46pm
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Re: Re: here is a new form for you Dave · 07-17-20 7:59am
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Re: here is a new form for you Dave · 07-16-20 11:21pm
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