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Jul 7, 2020 at 11:16am
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Re: Echoes In the Valley
by Past Member 'oldmonty'
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Did I write one b-4? Is it like this?

Too soon snow falls from the sky
Winter closes autumns door
It’s not for us to wonder why
No longer is it like before

Winter closes autumns door
The grass is covered by snow
No longer is it like before
Now the cold wind will blow

The grass is covered by snow
Cars will slide off the road
Now the cold wind will blow
Flowers sleep, will no longer grow.

Cars will slide off the road
It’s not for us to wonder why
Flowers sleep, will no longer grow
Too soon snow falls from the sky
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