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May 25, 2020 at 8:55pm
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Re: The Art of Reviewing Poetry
I thought l this was a totally excellent study on how to both, write and review poetry.
review All of the important elements are presented. I usually start out with the structure
then I go to theme, tone, punctuation, title, and suggestions for changes or corrections.


Chew's shoes
by Lisa Noe

There is a dog named Chew
He hid my favorite shoe.
I found it underneath the couch,
Chewy thought I was being a grouch.

so he took next my sock, this really wasn't a shock.
Good Chewy likes playing keep away,
He will play it all the long day.
He threw me for a loop, because he's a big snoop.




Review of Chew's Shoes

Structure: a poem written using two quatrains.

THeme: This is a poem about a dog named Chewy and how he likes to play and hide things.

Tone: the tone of this poem is fun

Punctuation: traditional punctuation was used in writing this poem. I hope I followed the rules properly.

Title: Chew's Shoes, is a cute title showing the playful tone of the poem. the title rhymes

Image: the image brought out in this poem is of a dog with a shoe under the couch.

Suggestions: This poem was a light-hearted poem, which had good internal and end rhymes, which were not forced.
it was done with full punctuation.

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