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May 20, 2020 at 2:42pm
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Re: Re: Jay O'Toole's Form of the week: Octain Refrain
That was a bit trickier for me this week.
I have adjusted the poem to agree with the first format of Abb a-c/c-a bA.
I'm still not sure it's perfect, but it better.

I had to juggle the words a little to keep the same basic meaning.
At any rate, thank you for once again challenging my poetic skills. *Smile*

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