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Apr 28, 2020 at 5:31pm
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Re: Re: Dave's Sonic Texturing
by Tinker Author IconMail Icon
Haha, Great example poem, thanks for leading the way Dave.

Love the sound of "bourgeois". I'm in a French frame of mind myself. This "April 28 La Moulin de la Galette, Pastry Chef"  might fit but it wasn't written for this discussion so I will see what else I can come up with.


"glares at bourgeois commuters,
          slaves to their computers,"

These are the best lines.

~~Judi
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