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Apr 17, 2020 at 12:57am
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Edited: April 17, 2020 at 1:00am
Re: Form of the week: Coronasonnet
this wasn't an easy one then again for me,, most aren't... *Laugh*




The Coronasonnet is a new form invented by the poets of SingPoWriMo (Singapore Poetry Writing Month) in the middle of the current COVID-19 pandemic.

The recipe for this viral concoction follows:
1. Written in 14 lines.
2. The coronasonnet has been infected by 2 lines from another poem(s) and includes them verbatim as part of its 14 lines.
3. The coronasonnet is asymptomatic for the first 8 lines, but from line 9 onwards, every word is written in all caps.
4. The coronasonnet ends with social distancing, with more and more space in each line. Lines 12-14 include only one-syllable words.

Inspired by the Lines from Celeste Miyana’s
“An Ailing Man’s Desertion”
Two lines borrowed:
“I must lie down where the walls grow apart
In the gentleness of the yet-to-depart.”

Every Man must Die
By Lisa Noe

It came into our lives so quick
Made every other man so sick
Don’t you fear for all is clear
The good Lord is watching over you my dear
If it be your time you’ll go
But Heaven bound is the direction you know
”I must lie down where the walls grow apart
In the gentleness of the yet-to-depart.”
YOU WILL NOT LEAVE THIS LIFE IN VANE.
IF YOU KNEW GOD THEN YOU’LL FEEL NO SHAME!
HE WILL SAVE YOUR SOUL
PRAISE
OUR
LORD!
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