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Jan 17, 2020 at 10:55am

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Edited: January 17, 2020 at 10:56am

Re: Lisa's Form of the week: Duplex

by Dave

200 GPs were sent to Lisa Noe

with this post.

Powerful tribute!

Fourth and fifth stanzas are missing refrain from previous stanzas, and the last line has no linkage to the first line.

Let the creativity flow from your soul!

Dave
"The Poet's Place "

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