~ The Poet's Place Cafe~

Hi Lisa, You had it nailed until the 4th couplet then you get off track a little but then you get back on. Actually all you would have to do in the 4th couplet is reverse the 2 lines. But then you'd have to repeat the 2nd line in the next couplet and so on.

Even off track a little, it is a beautiful poem, a testament of your faith.

~~Tink