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Jan 11, 2020 at 12:37pm
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Edited: January 11, 2020 at 12:38pm
Re: Jake's Form of the week: Garden Lace
by Tinker Author IconMail Icon
Hi Jake, You kind of missed the mark on rhyme and syllable count but your version of Garden Lace works for an interesting poem. I especially like the way it ends. "lost in the mountains"

~~Tink
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Re: Form of the week: Garden Lace · 01-15-20 12:15am
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Re: Jay O'Toole's Form of the week: Garden Lace · 01-15-20 3:20pm
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