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Jan 9, 2020 at 10:10pm
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Re: Form of the week: Garden Lace


In order to highlight the talent within our group, this week we are featuring the Garden Lace, which was invented by our own Roseille ♥ (353) . The Garden Lace is structured in a series of tercets with an interlocking rhyme scheme: ABA, BCB, CDC, DED, EAE. The first and second lines of each tercet have eight syllables each, while the third line has fourteen syllables

Chewy rides again
By Lisa Noe

Again I’ll talk about Chewy
And what he has done on this day
He went and had his hair cut and now he is a beauty

He whined the whole way there I say
He don’t like to ride in the car
I love baby chewy and he will always get his way

On the way there we passed a few bars
But I’d never stop, I don’t drink
Chew was getting on my nerves, though it wasn’t very far

He had a bath so he don’t stink
Every week he has a good bath
But my nerves are now on the brink

I am calm with him, there’s no rath
He is my sweet baby boy
My darling baby is always able to make me laugh.




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Re: Form of the week: Garden Lace · 01-15-20 12:15am
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Re: Jay O'Toole's Form of the week: Garden Lace · 01-15-20 3:20pm
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