~ The Poet's Place Cafe~

Monty, You are the rhyme guy, I thought this was right up your alley. I'm surprised the concept of linking rhyme escaped you. Actually if you began your poem with Stanza 3 you would have linking rhyme at least for the first 2 stanzas. Forgive me for playing with your poem.... Until the last stanza it was easy to slightly adjust to linking rhyme. I know an "old dog", but I see new tricks in your poetry all of the time.

I write poetry most of the time
Rhyme end lines is what I can do
Each time I try to find whats prime

To write of what I like to do
Is no easy task when your me
But is what I am asked by you

So although it’s hard I must try be.
To do this with thought and paper
Before this ancient pen runs dry for me

You see money I just have none is just a vapor
Poetry does not sell very well
But gold is in the rising sun, to savor

And I find silver in the stars
If you write you can find it too
With your words you might travel far.

~~Tink