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Dec 31, 2019 at 3:26pm

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Edited: December 31, 2019 at 3:27pm

Re: Lisa's DISCUSSION: Rhyme Time

by Dave

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Charming scene with a nice message, but, yeah, you missed the mark. We asked for three line stanzas with interlocking rhyme scheme. You wrote four line stanzas with some interlocking in the first two stanzas. It's the trying that counts.

Let the creativity flow from your soul!

Dave
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