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Dec 21, 2019 at 4:58am
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love wrapped refrain
by JCosmos Author IconMail Icon
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your love my dear fills me with cheer
falling under your love my dear
love at first sight blinded at sight
You came in dreams love at first sight
the day you came into my life that day you came
walking off the Korean bus the day you came


life began that day 38 years
38 years life began that day
when I first saw you great love grew
electric sparks when I first saw you
electricity flew as my love for you grew
the dream came true that day as electricity flew

yet another poem based on the dream love of my life
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love wrapped refrain · 12-21-19 4:58am
by JCosmos Author IconMail Icon
Re: Jake's love wrapped refrain · 12-21-19 8:44am
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Re: Jake's love wrapped refrain · 12-21-19 10:10am
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