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Dec 6, 2019 at 12:11pm

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Edited: December 6, 2019 at 12:12pm

Re: Lisa's Form of the week: Traditional Mongolian Meter

by Dave

200 GPs were sent to Lisa Noe

with this post.

Powerful message!

All the lines in each stanza should have rhyming words at the beginning, as you have done with "sappy"/"happy."

Let the creativity flow from your soul!

Dave
"The Poet's Place "

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Form of the week: Traditional Mongolian Meter · 12-05-19 7:40pm
by Dave

Re: Form of the week: Traditional Mongolian Meter · 12-05-19 8:53pm
by Roseille ♥

Re: Head rhyme -: Form of the week: Traditional Mongolia... · 12-06-19 1:11am
by Tinker

Re: Re: Re: Form of the week: Traditional Mongolian Meter · 12-06-19 1:15am
by Roseille ♥

Re: Roseille's Form of the week: Traditional Mongolian M... · 12-06-19 12:00pm
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Re: Re: Roseille's Form of the week: Traditional Mongoli... · 12-06-19 1:38pm
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Re: Form of the week: Traditional Mongolian Meter · 12-05-19 9:58pm
by Lisa Noe

Re: Lisa's Form of the week: Traditional Mongolian Meter · 12-06-19 12:11pm
by Dave

Re: Form of the week: Traditional Mongolian Meter · 12-06-19 7:54pm
by ShelleyA~16 years at WDC

Re: Shelley's Form of the week: Traditional Mongolian Meter · 12-07-19 5:15pm
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Re: Tink's Form of the week: Traditional Mongolian Meter · 12-07-19 12:11pm
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Re: Form of the week: Traditional Mongolian Meter · 12-09-19 1:59pm
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Re: Re: Form of the week: Traditional Mongolian Meter · 12-09-19 5:37pm
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Re: Form of the week: Traditional Mongolian Meter · 12-09-19 8:40pm
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Re: Neva's Form of the week: Traditional Mongolian Meter · 12-10-19 3:41pm
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