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Dec 1, 2019 at 11:26pm
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Re: Re: Jake's love cinquino
by JCosmos Author IconMail Icon
thanks appreciate the constructive criticism as always

revised

My Love
You came to me first in my dreams
dreaming of you for years
then you saved me
my love
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love cinquino · 11-30-19 8:36pm
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Re: Jake's love cinquino · 12-01-19 5:34pm
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*Star* Re: Re: Jake's love cinquino · 12-01-19 11:26pm
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Re: Re: Re: Jake's love cinquino · 12-02-19 1:33pm
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