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Dec 1, 2019 at 5:34pm
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Edited: December 1, 2019 at 5:34pm
Re: Jake's love cinquino
by Dave Author IconMail Icon
*Dollar* 200 GPs were sent to JCosmos Author Icon with this post.
Touching tribute!

Syllable counts are off in some lines:

My Love *Check*
You came to me night-ly in my dreams = 9 syllables, should be 8
Dream-ing of you for six years = 7 syllables, should be 6
then you saved me *Check*
my Love *Check*

Let the creativity flow from your soul! *Cool*
Dave
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love cinquino · 11-30-19 8:36pm
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*Star* Re: Jake's love cinquino · 12-01-19 5:34pm
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Re: Re: Jake's love cinquino · 12-01-19 11:26pm
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Re: Re: Re: Jake's love cinquino · 12-02-19 1:33pm
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