~ The Poet's Place Cafe~

Hi Delanora, Ah, this is lovely and sad. May I suggest you add the word "miss" to the 2nd phrase of the last line? If corrects your word count, adds repetition and alliterative rhyme and with that one little word, you've mastered the Three-Five-Seven frame.

" I miss his purrs in the springtime, miss his sweet meows in the moonlight."

Then take it the next step put it in {bitem: xxxxxx} or {entry: xxxxx} format and enter it into "Invalid Post"   @

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I hope to see this poem there.

~~Tink