~ The Poet's Place Cafe~

Hi Lisa, This is really pretty and almost have it. Clear parallel phrasing which is a difficult concept for some to execute. You already have been told you are short 4 words in your 2nd line. A pretty easy fix, you are a poet and master with words, what's 4 more?

I hope you take this the next step and enter your poem for "Invalid Post"   @

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. The poem should be in {bitem: xxxxx} or {entry: xxxxx} format for proper review. Thanks for considering it.

~~Tink