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Aug 5, 2019 at 5:21pm
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Edited: August 5, 2019 at 5:21pm
Re: Re: Dark Faery's Form of the week: Scallop
by Dave Author IconMail Icon
*Dollar* 200 GPs were sent to The Dark Faery Author Icon with this post.
Love the moody language!

The syllable counts are off just a tad:

qui-e-tly drizz-le = 5, should be 4
on the wood-ed mount-ain-side = 7, should be 6
ob-serve the Yule-tide = 5, should be 6

Let the creativity flow from your soul! *Cool*
Dave
"The Poet's Place
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Re: Re: Jay O'Toole's Form of the week: Scallop · 08-07-19 11:29am
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