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Love the moody language! The syllable counts are off just a tad: qui-e-tly drizz-le = 5, should be 4 on the wood-ed mount-ain-side = 7, should be 6 ob-serve the Yule-tide = 5, should be 6 Let the creativity flow from your soul! Dave "The Poet's Place " |