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Jul 17, 2019 at 12:24am

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Re: Re: Tink's Form of the week: Egg Timer

by the Wordy Jay

I see what you did there with the "morning" theme.

Nice!

Good job with the edits: the "circle" certainly appears more fluid in Revision 2, and the "yawning" and "sauntering" make for great imagery.

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Re: Wordy Jay's Form of the week: Egg Timer · 07-17-19 12:18am
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