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Jul 17, 2019 at 12:18am
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Re: Wordy Jay's Form of the week: Egg Timer
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I used different punctuation for the top and bottom halves of my "egg poem" to make the flow of thought more coherent. I'm wondering though if this still "qualifies" as an egg poem 'coz the bottom halve is no longer strictly a "mirror image" of the top halve.

Thoughts? Thanks!



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