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OMG, you are so right. Good catch! I got so caught up in rhymed couplets, I completely ignored the c rhyme. As a matter of fact, I dump a 10 syllable line because it rhymed with the other 10 syllable line and I, for some reason, thought I had to change the rhyme. Back to the drawing board. I'll fix it. ~~Tink Revision Bonnie Homeland Scotland, bagpipe band, blue and red plaid, heritage through my Dad. Highland greenery calls to me I want to breathe its landscape and the sea. Tracing the path of my roots, I would be strapping on my boots to brashly walk among the gingers, meet no stranger Oh, so grand, Scotland. ~~jvg |
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