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Mar 8, 2019 at 3:20pm

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Edited: March 8, 2019 at 3:21pm

Re: Re: Monty's Form of the week: Canopus

by Dave

Rhyme scheme and syllable counts are good, but the iambic meter is lacking. However, the sentiments come through clearly, and that is what really matters, after all is said and done.

Let the creativity flow from your soul!

Dave
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Form of the week: Canopus · 03-07-19 6:29pm
by Dave

Re: Form of the week: Canopus · 03-07-19 7:24pm
by Past Member 'oldmonty'

Re: Re: Form of the week: Canopus · 03-07-19 9:10pm
by Mary Ann MCPhedran

Re: Re: Monty's Form of the week: Canopus · 03-08-19 3:20pm
by Dave

Re: Re: Re: Monty's Form of the week: Canopus · 03-08-19 3:31pm
by Past Member 'oldmonty'

Re: Tink's Form of the week: Canopus · 03-08-19 12:49am
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Re: Re: Tink's Form of the week: Canopus · 03-08-19 3:27pm
by Dave

Re: Form of the week: Canopus · 03-24-19 6:25pm
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Re: Re: Neva's Form of the week: Canopus · 03-25-19 11:16am
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