The Contest Challenge

I had to read it when you said it was something you'd never written before. lol That was GREAT! So, you don't normally write about ghosts or in that style or what? A big part of this challenge is stretching yourself, so GOOD JOB!

One thing you might want to fix...the 1st line in the 2nd stanza says, "Her flesh and bones lay and the ground," and I think that might should be "...on the ground." So, is that an actual ghost? Who is it? I think you should include a little info about her like her name and what city and state she's in--just my opinion. You can do that in light grey or in a dropnote or something. I usually put stuff in light grey if it's information related to but not actually a part of the story or poem--but that's me.

Nice work! Good luck!

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