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Perhaps ALTO wants to sell people's memories so people will begin to understand the value of human lives. I dunno just a thought. I like the idea of having the technology be advanced, yet simple, I think it looks more realistic. This story reminds me of the movie Altered Carbon, you could check it out if you want. Also thanks for the donation, I forgot to mention. My help is free, but I have been thinking of posting for one of my stories on this forum once it gets big enough. You could also help other people's stories on this forum, and I'll always accept reviews. Thanks for the offer! -Tin |