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May 21, 2018 at 3:54pm
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Since we are talking about using adjectives and adverbs cautionsly, I wanted to show you an example of using them purposefully and choosing powerful ones that really say something to the reader. This is an excerpt from Agent of Change by Sharon Lee and Steve Miller.

         ”The street was brightly lit and empty; a fledgling breeze tossed an occasional bit of plastic trash about.”

Ms. Pat

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Take a look at this · 05-21-18 3:54pm
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