Writing Critique Group #2

Not to worry at all. Take your time. It's better to give something that's not rushed and complete. That and I didn't have to worry about missing your critique (selfish me)!

So long as you guys are in for an assassin character. . .start with the oldest story in the timeline. Gonna switch to my world, The Sister Realms, for a bit now. Hopefully I can get the magic system off the ground with it. Need to give it a shove.

It all froze over. My own long driveway was an ice rink. Come to me in the middle of March. . .I'll show you! Was born in Southern California. Moved to somewhere near the Chicago area. Now am here in the middle of the US. Sunnier here than in Chicago during winter, which makes a big difference.