Writing Critique Group #2

I am a bit behind on my steampunk revision. I meant to get another chapter in, but I was offered a second column on a magazine that I contribute to and I've been busy getting it set up for the year. Not to mention doing posts for my blog. I will get a chapter done in time for this new rotation. One of the things I like about the group is that it does give me a push to get the revision done!

If you want to switch to a new project, Kerri, by all means do. It will not bother me at all. :) I'm sure Katz won't mind either.

Hmm...ice storm. I haven't seen one of those in years. We are in the middle of our Californian "winter" right now. This means a few days of rain here and there for a few more weeks. The people here call them "storms". Growing up in Seattle, we'd call them soft days. :) I rather enjoy the break from the high heat waves and my roses love all the free rainwater. :)