\"Writing.Com
*Magnify*
Printed from https://webx1.writing.com/main/forums/message_id/298645
Item Icon
Rated: ASR · Message Forum · Tribute · #123292

If you love it, post it... The best poems on writing.com

<< Previous  •  Message List  •  Next >>
Reply  •  Post New
Feb 28, 2002 at 10:09pm
#298645
A Jade Reminder by: Bosco Baggins
 (This message was edited by stormyrene on 02-28-02 @ 10:29 pm EST)

 Invalid Item Open in new Window.
This item number is not valid.
#358138 by Not Available.

I give it 4½ stars


A Jade Reminder

A jade reminder dangles somewhere,
Somewhere between the passing journey
And green exuberance of dream.

Crystal towers mirror twisting paths.
Rainbows chase ahead through many yesterdays,
Recede through future’s fickle trail.

A backward glance at velvet carpet;
Rolled demonstrative, extended red
In wealthy welcome, yet drawn asunder.

Worn from soldiers’ shoe, trod by scorn
Thread bare with exasperation
Marching pointless into countless battles.

The price of wealth be penny’s thorn.
Smile, rich as sunshine; laugh, a nurtured grace,
Its worth in warmth, for growth’s full face.

Embracing wonders, facing fears
In crystal casings many. Old map tracing,
Slow erasing, lines of heavy jaded tears.

Crystal dawn reflect tomorrow,
Cloud lectures warning wisely, forge ahead,
Velvet threads of scorn are past.

~~***~~
MESSAGE THREAD
*Star*
A Jade Reminder by: Bosco Baggins · 02-28-02 10:09pm
by Stormy Lady Author IconMail Icon

The following applies to this forum item as a whole, not this post. Feedback sent here will go to the forum's owner, Stormy Lady.
Printed from https://webx1.writing.com/main/forums/message_id/298645