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Jul 23, 2015 at 8:20am
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Three First Pages?!
by Shaye Author IconMail Icon
I've got three different ideas, which portray the same thing for my first page. I need to figure out which one is the best at hooking the reader.

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Feel free to give me a hand in deciding!

Oh, and thanks Marci Missing Everyone Author Icon and the other judges for choosing me as one of those that got through to the next round! *Bigsmile*

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Three First Pages?! · 07-23-15 8:20am
by Shaye Author IconMail Icon
Re: Three First Pages?! · 07-23-15 6:00pm
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