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Nov 10, 2012 at 11:59pm
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Today's Excerpt
So... Thought I'd share this here.... This is what I think the best part of what i wrote today is:

“You have got to be kidding me? Why in all the love of the gods, did I have to get stuck with the only man in existence that has no knowledge of the modern human world?” The last said as she turned her face up towards the sky and seemed to be counting to some unknown number. Her elongated fangs glinting in the pale moon light while the moon itself was making the porcelain appearance of her skin glow. After releasing a slow breath, Ariella sighed and peered at Vonyx, her crimson eyes focusing on his face as she explained. “A hospital is a place where there are healers. But here, things are done differently, they study the blood and make up of everyone that they heal. While normally that is a good thing, on this world, it can cause major problems, causing either a panic, or the people to lock you up and study like some kind of animal. Congratulations, warrior, you dropped us into the lowest pit of hell itself. The natives call it Earth.”
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Today's Excerpt · 11-10-12 11:59pm
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