October Novel Prep Challenge

Whoa! Didn't know it made such an impact! Thank you though, Mr. Jed. That was my FMC in mental action, and as she suffers from bipolar disorder - and therefore unstable moods - you're not too wrong with manic. She just got washed away by her feelings.

Yes, spot on the run-ons! Something I still didn't get past yet. German bad habit. But as the FMC is a German manic-depressive female ... It's cool though that they appear fast-paced despite their longness. An oxymoron, as the mean linguist says. I didn't notice the switches in the scenery and in time so much, but actually, they fit Laura's fickle mind quite nicely.