Erotica Harem

First, I had wondered about the girl you mentioned before. How sad that her life was lost and I can see your pain in seeing the girl and her attacker and not realizing at that moment what the situation was or would become. It's good to have friends that don't say the goofy things that some people say. Like you said this is pain that won't go away so it helps to talk sometimes. Even if it's a line or two in an email. Now, I hope that I didn't say anything that might upset you here. I try not to be insensitive, but it can be hard in typed words to not seem that way.

As for Kade. I am all for what you suggested in your reply. I'll have to work hard on the rewrite of that chapter. You'll have a hayday with the next chapter I bet. Jett will come to the rescue, but in the way he does away with the foes may make you cringe. I bet you can suggest some better ways of how he could put them out of the action. I don't know whether to be excited about you reading the next chapter or run and hide.

Well, I'll be working on chapter 1 and 2 today and I'll let you know when I get chapter 2 rewritten. Chapter one, I'm just going to edit and maybe add a tiny bit here and there and leave it for my publisher to pick apart and give to an editor. lol Hopefully with your help I'll have a much better product to submit to her.


Thanks again for your help.

Dragon