CONTEST: Go to your Happy Place!

I was just reading your entry, and yes, on the balance it did not focus as directly on the setting as I had in mind, and the other submittals show. Would you like to tweak it a little more first in light of this - though the other parts were good - just doesn't quite meet the "rules"

Thanks,
Laurie

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