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Hello there, I am quite new to writers.com, to be honest, I've always been intimidated to write as I feel that sometimes I am not good enough to write in the level of talent I've seen out there. Descriptive words that come easy to others, often leave me sitting with a thesaurus and a dictionary. I do feel though I'm getting much better, and I'd be forever in debt to those who could find a moment of spare time, to read my short film script "The End"

I am making it into a film, and I am anxious to hear the response from respected members of this community. I will take all criticism with a kind thank you and try to emulate and improve via suggestions. Again, thank you for your time, as time is a precious gift we're given on this earth, I am always forever grateful to kind communities as this one seems to be!