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Hey there,
Thanks for opening my link.
There's this novel I'm workin on and I'd like as many reviews as possible.

It centres around teenagers and two rival families. VERY teen oriented. It has received pretty positive reviews, except one. Which is why I'm curious to know what other people think of it.
DO check it out. I would really appreciate it.
And if you like it, spread the word.

Mail-Storm (part 1)  (13+) Two rival families and a wedding. Funny, flirty and all things teen with LOTS of drama! :D #1822525 by Vaichi10

Mail-Storm (part 2)  (13+) Two rival families and a wedding. Funny, flirty and all things teen with LOTS of drama! :D #1822612 by Vaichi10

Part 3 will be out once I get sufficient reviews. I hope that by the time you get to Part 3, the novel really begins to interest you and I won't have to shell out GPs for a review :P

Thank You!!!
Vaichi10