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Rat in the Shadows

Has the Shadow (Mark Rathman) met his match in the Rat (David Braxton)?

This is a sequel to Let Sleeping Dogs Lie. Mark, Christine and Marv Lindsey along with a young orphan named Sandy Middleton get sucked into dangerous political intrigue and have to work together to survive and overcome the Rat.

I appreciate the feedback I've gotten on LSDL. I plan to do a comprehensive rewrite over the next two or three months using the feedback I've gotten on it. The problems pointed out to this point do repeat in the later chapters. For the most part I know what needs to be done so I want to pull it from the board for the time being and put Rat in the Shadows in it's place. The new story is a work in progress but hopefully you guys will see that I've learned something since coming to WDC. I will add new chapters now and then as they get written.

Current chapters are:

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#1803499
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#1815899

Thanx,

Pico