Thanks, Jon. For the great review. I'm so glad you like Sean and Aran. I'll be looking over this chapter and using what you suggested. I didn't change much in this story, just tried to clean up the chapters and now waiting for chapter 8 to get a good solid form before I start writing. Aran appears to want it in her pov, so we'll see how that goes.
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