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Aug 18, 2011 at 12:27am
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Re: Review: Waiting to Die chapter 1 by David
by A Non-Existent User
OH, Dragon,
THANK YOU for the review and PRAISE. I need it to keep my tank full! And Thank You for the suggestions, one of which was made by someone else (word repetition) and somehow I failed to correct it.

And THANK YOU, very much, for herding the commas to keep them away from me. They scare me!

Sincerely,
David
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Review: Waiting to Die chapter 1 by David · 08-17-11 12:45pm
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Re: Review: Waiting to Die chapter 1 by David · 08-18-11 12:28am
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Re: Re: Review: Waiting to Die chapter 1 by David · 08-18-11 10:36am
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