Erotica Harem

Alex,
THANK YOU for this review, too. Please see below in BLOOD, uh, i mean BOLD.
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> At the end of the chapter, Josh asks his mother why she hates him. I didn’t get the
> impression that Maria hated him, just that she just didn’t approve anything he did.
> She wants him to inherit the family law firm, which doesn’t sound like she hates
> him. At twenty, I’m sure that Maria is still stinging from his teenager years and
> hasn’t seen anything worthwhile in him yet. Remember she mentions that he’ll
> be a top-notch lawyer and intelligent?
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> If you want Josh to ask that question, think about putting some more animosity between
> mother and son.
I intended that as a hook. He's being emotional. She didn't say, and doesn't hate him. She answers in the opening of the next chapter.............Ok?
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Thanks again, Alex. I feel more gooderful !

Sweet David