Erotica Harem

This is a vamp story turned major novel--468 pages! Anywya, Dragon and I collaborated on this one and I am in the midst of editing it (the first round), so please let me know what you think! Four main characters--2 couples, and we did the natural thing, a couple each! I am esepcially interested in how our different writing styles mesh, whether it helps readers differentiate characters or just confuses people. I am too close to it to really be objective, though i am already editing for the obvious stuff. Any help is greatly appreicated!

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