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Aug 13, 2011 at 1:17am
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Re: Review of Waiting to Die, Chapter 1
by A Non-Existent User
Ohhhhh, Alex !
My little heart pitted then paddered when I saw your message.
THANK YOU for the review, just like old times.
At the end you said to add a comma, but I had one there and someone else said take it out. I HATE FUCKING COMMAS.
I'll leave these for Dalia to figure out. She's been good for me.

Welcome back!

Sweet David


Sincerely,
David


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