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Hi everyone!

I was just hoping you could give me some advice. I really want to improve my writing and considering the help I got from all the reviewers, I believe getting other people's opinion is the best way to realize my mistakes.

I love writing in English but it is not my first language. I think I am more used to it in technical writing. So I am having hesitations on using figures of speech and idiomatic expressions. I think it limits my writing and if I can improve on it maybe I can make my work more creative.

Please let me know what you think about what I should do...thanks everyone!
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