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I might not ease the pain, but I'll give solid value for your trouble.

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Aug 9, 2011 at 3:44pm
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A letter of regret from Dad.
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This was one of those few items I woke up and wrote in the middle of the night. It is about my father in law who passed away approximately 9 months before my youngest was born. I find it eerie that pieces like this come to me while I am half asleep. I have edited this about three times now and feel this overwhelming need to submit it or include it in my own short story collection I am working on.

I need some "real" opinions on this piece because it is not what I am used to writing.

Thank you.

Zoe
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Not quite sure about this piece · 08-09-11 3:44pm
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Re: Not quite sure about this piece · 09-01-11 9:32am
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