Daily Flash Fiction Challenge

very strange story. it sounds just like you have no clue what you're writing. how can you write a story if you have no clue what's going on? this story didn't have any plot, and barely any good details. this sounds somthing like your thoughts trying to come up with a story and this is supposed to be somthing like an outline... ? this story is all over the place, skipping from one thing to another and then going back and making no sense at all. and you're not definite with anything. it didn't make much sense, and when you put the words "THE END" at the end of it i'm sure you're leaving people scratching their heads.