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Hey everyone, I'm a new author to writing.com, and I signed up to get the story I've been working on a little exposure. I'm a very young author at sixteen years old, but I think that if you give my work a chance you might enjoy it. My story is titled "Young Terror" and is a horror/survival story about the zombie apocalypse, which is my forte in writing. Any reviews and constructive critisism is completely encouraged, I'd love to hear what the community has to say. Thank you for reading this in the first place, and if you read my story, all the better :)