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Sunrise classroom for posting assignments & discussion topics #2 (BLUE ROOM)

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Jun 7, 2011 at 4:54pm
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Re: SD discussion 5

I agree with you about the 3rd example. I couldn't see setting or detect any real voice, other than complaining. Without any real voice to go on it's not easy to put a setting to the short piece. In example 1 and 3 it was easy to put a setting to the characters voice.

Like you, I begin a story with an idea about plot, then inject the characters, then hopefully they change.


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