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This is a 900ish word story, and I'd like to submit it to a contest. I would love another pair of eyes. My main area of concern is the fact that it is about a sailor. I am in the military and have been for a while, so I don't want my piece to only be understood by those who've served. Any thoughts on that would be greatly appreciated. Thank you for any time you have to take a look. Tina B |
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