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I will review any short story or novel. No deed to pay although I accept donations.

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Jan 6, 2011 at 10:46pm
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Just one chapter. please and thank you.
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I have written this story from six perspectives simultaneously. This is only the first chapter, I can post more if you'd like to read more. The main question I have is if it is written in an understandable format while jumping between character perspectives. Any other comments or suggestions would also be appreciated.

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Just one chapter. please and thank you. · 01-06-11 10:46pm
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